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Post by Stephanie Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:05 pm

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The more I look at this, the weirder it looks. :C
Criticism plz.
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Post by Andy. Wed Mar 17, 2010 10:34 pm

Peace sign doesn't look right.
(If this is the final product) The sketch lines make the character look 'hairy'.
The eye's color area (pupil?) should be smaller than the eyebrow things that surround the eye, IMO.
It's really cute though. o:

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Post by Amalie Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:29 am

As Andy already mentioned, the peace sign doesn't look right.
All I find odd about the peace sign is that it looks like it doesn't have a thumb.

And on the left side of the body, the arm and the head got really sketched and doesn't look right.
When you color it, you should think about trying to make it more of a whole.

On the left leg, you should've shown a little bit of the left foot .
and last SMALL thing, {I didn't really care that much about it. }
maybe some shading on the skin? o: .

it's a really nice drawing though . :}
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